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Memory Bound by ViridiVulpes Memory Bound by ViridiVulpes
Finally!! I didnt think I was ever going to Finish this!! Took weeks.. Kept puttin it off and off.. Theres so many mistakes... I just go so lazy and wanted to hurry and finish.. The fire in Volunis's hand looks weird.. and the light cast off by the fire looks weird too.. Oh well. Pretty pleased regardless.

Here we have my main OCs in my story Memory Bound. Left to right: Astrian. Ever, Volunis. No love triangle. I keep getting that whenever someone sees this. -_-'

Astrian (c) Me
Ever (c) Me
Volunis (c) Me
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this is a great piece of art! its drawn incredibly well the only thing that needs improvement is more realistic shading on the skin, and hair. i love the coloring on the girls tank top thingy :3

i would defiantly look through your gallery!

also quick question, what program did you use to color this? (i recommend SAI)

ALSO the way you drew the lips is epic >__< thats what im worst at! mine always look like two blobs XD but these are very well defined and look great.

great work...keep it up :D

also dont be shy to check out my gallery :3
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hi first time writing a critique in here. >< (oh and i found your work form :iconselftaughtartist: CRfolder)
so'bout the drawing: one immediate problem i see is that they are not...distinct enough. maybe make use of shadows and highlights to define the edges and other places, eg neck, and you missed out shadows of clothes onthe people
and yeah you pointed out the fire, try drawing with more, flowy shapes, and fire usually has a few tones of colours.

overall i like your detail in hair and their features, goodjob onthat, and your positioning?(the right word suddenly escapes me now) is great:)
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Kira-Kira-San Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
I'm so glad you finished it! ;w; it looks really REALLY good!
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ViridiVulpes Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I didnt think I ever would!! Changed it so many times!

Thanks! :heart:
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