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Submitted: December 18, 2012
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Memory Boundby ~ViridiVulpes

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / People / Portraits

Finally!! I didnt think I was ever going to Finish this!! Took weeks.. Kept puttin it off and off.. Theres so many mistakes... I just go so lazy and wanted to hurry and finish.. The fire in Volunis's hand looks weird.. and the light cast off by the fire looks weird too.. Oh well. Pretty pleased regardless.

Here we have my main OCs in my story Memory Bound. Left to right: Astrian. Ever, Volunis. No love triangle. I keep getting that whenever someone sees this. -_-'

Astrian (c) Me
Ever (c) Me
Volunis (c) Me

Critique by ~keiketsu Dec 24, 2012, 3:19:39 PM

Saw your picture from

First of all, I like the balance of the picture as a whole, it keeps your eyes on the girl, but also draws it to the two guys on the side.

One thing that may be lacking slightly is how defined the figures are. Perhaps try most shades and varieties of colours. It would really bring out the faces of the characters as well as their clothing.

With that said, perhaps you could include more details in the painting (perhaps designs on the shirts like you did with the girl)

Overall, I think it's a great attempt for a digital painting and I hope you the best!

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Critique by ~JaeToh Dec 23, 2012, 5:11:54 PM

hi first time writing a critique in here. >< (oh and i found your work form

CRfolder)
so'bout the drawing: one immediate problem i see is that they are not...distinct enough. maybe make use of shadows and highlights to define the edges and other places, eg neck, and you missed out shadows of clothes onthe people
and yeah you pointed out the fire, try drawing with more, flowy shapes, and fire usually has a few tones of colours.

overall i like your detail in hair and their features, goodjob onthat, and your positioning?(the right word suddenly escapes me now) is great